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I love to learn Chinese and I learn myself through many Chinese songs. This is my voice ... hjhjhj That's my way to learn Chinese language  :P

 

芙蓉雨 [Furong yu] at: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=p1NZgXVgdb8

 

Lyrics:

 

藕花香 染檐牙
惹那诗人纵步随她
佩声微 琴声儿退
斗胆了一池眉叶丹砂
 
画船开 心随他
谁不作美偏起风沙
倚蓬窗 月色轻晃
偶闻得渔翁一席话
 
(试问) 多一份情又怎地
站在别人的雨季
淋湿自己空弹一出戏
空望他 功成名就又怎地
豆腐换成金羽衣 
岂不知你已在画里
 
这一搭 莲蓬子落地 几回迷
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水平真不错,竟然能欣赏这类古文。

 

歌词里没有什么古文 :-?

 

Agree with Shelley, video is very nicely made (assuming it's all your own work).

 

Pronunciation comments:

  • Your [r] sound in “染” is very slightly rolled, should be no rolling.
  • Some of your [z], [zh] and [ch] sounds are too soft, i.e. not enough of a definite plosive sound at the beginning.
  • Last line “几回迷” sounded like [xi kui mi] instead of [ji hui mi]. A few other places seem to have the same problem with [j] or [q] sounding like [x].
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Pronunciation comments:

  • Your [r] sound in “染” is very slightly rolled, should be no rolling.
  • Some of your [z], [zh] and [ch] sounds are too soft, i.e. not enough of a definite plosive sound at the beginning.
  • Last line “几回迷” sounded like [xkui mi] instead of [jhui mi]. A few other places seem to have the same problem with [j] or [q] sounding like [x].

 

Thank so much for your contribution :D

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  • 5 months later...

I agree with what Demonic_Duck said about pronunciation but I also want to mention breathing. Here's where I hear you breathed:

 

惹那诗人纵步随她 (0‘46)

偶闻得 渔翁'一席话 (1'27, 2'44) 

岂不知你已在'画里 (3'12)

and last verse 几回'迷

 

I think given the meaning and punctuation of the lyrics they shouldn't be obvious gaps here? Otherwise the lyrics sound out of breath. 

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