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WeiTing

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Hello! I was tasked with writing a poem in Chinese for class. I translated a poem I wrote myself and was hoping to bet some helpful reviews/ revision. I open to any suggestions and just want to make sure it makes sense and is grammatically correct. Here it is:

 

明亮的星星飞越天空

"Bright stars fly across the sky"

与银河系水

"With the water of the Milky Way"

我还没有看到东西如此美,

"I have never seen anything so beautiful,"

除了你的微笑。

"Apart from your smile."

 

I wrote the original english poem that I wrote under each line. Thank you so much for your help! :) 谢谢你!

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