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高太太对白先生,芄先生,“来吃饭,反好了。”她做了便饭,可是百先生想太麻烦了。他也想高太太做了很多菜。高先生对芄他的太太不怎么会做菜,和没甚么好菜。他们吃开始,然后百先生请,“菜都叫甚么?”他们有狮子头,炒白菜,红烧,还有炒豆腐。芄先生和百先生都想高太太的菜很好,比饭馆的菜都好。然后他们谈中国饭馆在美国。百先生说在美国的中国饭馆差不多都是广东饭馆,和没有高太太做的这么好吃。他也谈这个菜里头都有甚么。高太太请两位再来,下次来她叫美英做。她把汤拿出来以后,就他们真吃饱了。然后他们和一点茶,再出走。

很多谢谢你们。

a couple notes..

芄 = Mr. Wan, I couldn't find the right character for it.

红烧 = supposed to be red-cooked chicken, but couldn't find character for "ji"

Basically my goal for this part is to read a dialogue, and summarize it the best I can in character form.

Looking for grammatical help, or just to tell me if my summarization is 不好

:help

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Mr. Wan maybe is 万先生, and next question is “红烧鸡”

高太太对白先生,芄先生,“来吃饭,反好了。”

高太太对白先生,万先生说:“来吃饭,饭好了。”

她做了便饭,可是百先生想太麻烦了。他也想高太太做了很多菜。高先生对芄他的太太不怎么会做菜,和没甚么好菜。

sorry , I don't understand.

他们吃开始,然后百先生请,“菜都叫甚么?”

他们开始吃饭,白先生问道:“这些菜叫什么名字啊?”

他们有狮子头,炒白菜,红烧,还有炒豆腐。

它们分别叫狮子头,炒白菜,红烧?,还有炒豆腐。Who said this sentence?

he = 他

she= 她

it = 它

芄先生和百先生都想高太太的菜很好,比饭馆的菜都好。

万先生和白先生都觉得高太太的菜做的很好,甚至比饭馆的菜都好。

甚至 = moreover,furthermore

然后他们谈中国饭馆在美国。百先生说在美国的中国饭馆差不多都是广东饭馆,和没有高太太做的这么好吃。

然后他们谈论美国的中国饭馆。白先生说在美国的中国饭馆差不多都是广东饭馆,没有高太太做的这么好吃。

他也谈这个菜里头都有甚么。

他们还谈这些菜里面都有些什么。

高太太请两位再来,下次来她叫美英做。

太太请两位再来做客,下次来的话,她叫美英做。美英 who?

她把汤拿出来以后,就他们真吃饱了。

高太太把汤端了出来.喝完汤,他们觉得吃的很饱了。

然后他们和一点茶,再出走。

然后他们喝了点茶,一起离开了。

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高太太对白先生、万先生說:「来吃饭,好了。她做的是便饭,可是先生看到她做了很多菜,覺得太麻烦了。高先生对他們說,他的太太不怎么会做菜,而且也没甚么好菜。然后他们便开始吃饭。白先生問:「这些菜叫甚么名字」主人回答說,它狮子头炒白菜红烧,还有炒豆腐。先生和先生都觉得高太太的菜做得很好,甚至比饭馆的菜好。然后他们谈起美国的中国饭馆。先生说在美国的中国饭馆差不多都是广东饭馆,而且都没有高太太做这么好吃。他又問到是用什做的。高太太请他們两位下次再来,說到時叫美英做然后她把汤出来,喝完了汤他们就真的很饱了。他们再喝了一点茶,然后便离开了

BTW, fried doufu?

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thanks again..

smsung

高先生对他們說,他的太太不怎么会做菜,而且也没甚么好菜

他太客气马? Hmmm, no, I think he is looking for trouble actually :D

skylee

i also though fried doufu was strange, ask john defrancis, he wrote the book lol.. thanks for the corrections.

galiton

thanks for the corrections. i see obviously with so many i'm going to make my teacher wince in a few hours when she sees it.

她做了便饭,可是百先生想太麻烦了。他也想高太太做了很多菜。高先生对芄他的太太不怎么会做菜,和没甚么好菜。

I don't know what I was trying to say either!! :conf

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obviously i will take your corrections into consideration, but there are some characters i don't recognize.. this is how my jiaoshou corrected it, is there still glaring mistakes??

高太太对万先生,白先生说:“来吃饭,饭好了。”高太太说她做便饭,可是她做了很多菜,所以万先生觉得太麻烦她了。高先生万先生说他的内人不怎么会做菜,也没甚么好菜。他们开始吃饭,然后白先生问,“菜都叫甚么?”它们有狮子头,炒白菜,红烧鸡,还有炒豆腐。万先生和白先生都觉得高太太的菜很好,比饭馆的菜都好。然后他们谈中国饭馆差不多都是广东饭馆,也没有高太太做的这么好吃。他也谈这个菜里都有甚么。高太太请两位再来,下次来她叫美英做。她把汤拿来以后,他们就真吃饱了。

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“么﹐至﹐什﹐端﹖”

In the context of your composition:

什么 -what

么 (me) alone does not mean much....

甚至 = (lit. even more as to)

甚至比饭馆的菜都好

even better than restaurants' food. (lit. even more as to than restaurants' food also good)

至 alone means: to/get to

端 -carry (usually small but heavy object) at around chest level with both hands

然后她把汤端出来

then she [carried with both hands] the soup out.

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thank you.

when i asked what they were b4 sadly i hadn't figured out how to put traditional characters into NJStar, after that though i figured most of them out or looked them up in a character dictionary.

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