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hi there i need help to make sure the sentence i have here are correct

 

Nǐ hǎo. Subject: Wǒ shì shuí?

Wǒ de míngzì shì SHAYAN Dàn nǐ kěyǐ jiào wǒ (xué yǎng).

Wǒ yǒu èrshíliù suì

Wǒ yǒu liǎng gè xiōngdì hé yīgè mèimei Hobbies and interests:

Wǒ xǐhuān chī de shíwù yě hē Soft Drink

Wǒ zuì xǐhuān de wèntí shì: Nǎlǐ shì hǎo cānguǎn ma?

Wǒ xǐhuān shùxué hé physics.

Wǒ xiǎng cānguān zhōngguó yě chángshì zhōngguó cài.

Xièxiè

 thanks for your help

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xiōngdì: you need to specify this: how many gēge, how many dìdi?

soft drink: consider 汽水 qìshuǐ. Strictly speaking this is only carbonated drinks, but perhaps that's what you mean.

physics: 化学 huàxué

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Lu, you may want to get a bit more sleep if that's your translation for physics :P

Shayan, your hobbies and interests need to be revised. "chi de shiwu" is not correct, and you can't use "ye" to connect two sentences.

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Lu, you may want to get a bit more sleep if that's your translation for physics
That's not a sleep issue, that's a me always having to think which one is physics and which one chemistry again. So yeah. Physics: 物理学 wùlǐxué
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Normally, we use "物理(wùlǐ)“ for "physics". 

 

Wǒ yǒu èrshíliù suì, generally we would say 我26岁Wǒ èrshíliù suì, we don't use "yǒu"

 

Hobbies and interests:

Wǒ xǐhuān chī de shíwù yě hē Soft Drink, I think you should rewrite the sentence, maybe you would like to say your hobbies are to eat and drink? Give you an example: 我喜欢吃美食(delicious food)和喝饮料 Wǒ xǐhuān chī měi shí hé hē yǐn liào

 

Wǒ zuì xǐhuān de wèntí shì: Nǎlǐ shì hǎo cānguǎn ma? Probably, it's better to use " Nǎlǐ yǒu hǎo cānguǎn? "

 

- Wǒ xiǎng cānguān zhōngguó yě chángshì zhōngguó cài. The order is not correct,  Wǒ xiǎng zhōngguó cānguān...

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Technically soft drinks is 软饮料 or 软饮, but seems a bit too formal for this context in Chinese. Normally you'd be a bit more specific, e.g. 喝汽水、喝茶、喝咖啡. If you want to keep it general you could just say 喝水. Though 水 literally means "water", in practice it can be used for any soft drink.

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