SamiLaknel 0 Report post Posted June 18, 2017 大家好， I was writing to my Chinese girlfriend and I was wondering is my Chinese handwriting good? Does it look like a 2nd grader? Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
somethingfunny 794 Report post Posted June 19, 2017 I've seen a lot worse. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
iekkim 19 Report post Posted June 19, 2017 Mine is much worse... considering I actually studied Chinese as a kid. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
lips 258 Report post Posted June 19, 2017 “夏”字写错了。 1 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
duoduo 0 Report post Posted June 19, 2017 美丽is beautiful 关心is careful, I don't understand what's your point. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Lu 3,190 Report post Posted June 19, 2017 Your handwriting looks pretty decent to me. And even if it wasn't: she's your girlfriend, not your calligraphy teacher (unless she's both). She'll love the note for its content and because it came from you. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
lips 258 Report post Posted June 19, 2017 “有爱心” would be better than “关心”. Put something in front of “有一个”, something like “愿你”、“祝你”、“希望你”、etc. 2 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Publius 1,622 Report post Posted June 19, 2017 2 hours ago, duoduo said: 关心is careful, I don't understand what's your point. I think he means "Have a nice summer. You are such a caring and beautiful girl." (Pretty much how Google would translate it.) 1 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
TonganRambo 14 Report post Posted June 19, 2017 The 的 looks a bit awkward because the first stroke extends past the 日 part. Almost makes it look like a 亻+ 日 1 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
dwq 189 Report post Posted June 19, 2017 关心 is a verb, you can't use it like an adjective. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
