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Pasharain

This is a translation of a song.  Can someone please correct it?  Thank so much.  I can look at something English in return.

 

huí xiǎng qī chǐ fēng xuě zhōng guī qù 

回  想    七 尺  风   雪  中    归  去 

Think back to seven feet of wind and snow

yáo yáo shù yuè sì wú qī 

遥  遥  数  月  似 无 期 

Months seem to stretch out like water

xuè rǎn yīng huā yān yún lǐ 

血  染  樱   花  烟  云  里 

Blood in the clouds of primrose smoke

qià sì wú shēng de fú bǐ 

恰  似 无 声    的 伏 笔 

Like a silent pen

wàn zhòng yì xīn fēng yān qǐ 

万  众    一 心  烽   烟  起 

Many a heart feng smoke

ruò zú hún yào guī gù lǐ 

若  卒 魂  要  归  故 里 

If the spirit of the dead return to the past

sī niàn míng yuè luò shuǐ dǐ 

思 念   明   月  落  水   底 

Think of the bottom of the water next month

ér nǚ yīng xióng wéi zhī jǐ 

儿 女 英   雄    为  知  己 

A son and a daughter know each other

xǐng lái zhī shí   kè xià yí shì 

醒   来  之  时    刻 下  一 世  

When I wake up, I will be in the next world

zhōu zāo yǐ chuāng shāng biàn dì 

周   遭  已 创     伤    遍   地 

Zhou was wounded all over the ground

lí míng zhī hòu   yǎn jìn wū gòu 

黎 明   之  后    眼  浸  污 垢  

Li Ming after the eye immersion dirt

jǐ liang zhù huà wéi huī jìn 

脊 梁    柱  化  为  灰  烬  

The ridge beams burned to ash

dí rén què hái xián bú gòu 

敌 人  却  还  嫌   不 够  

The enemy was not satisfied

wàng xiǎng cóng wǒ shēn shàng kuà qù 

妄   想    从   我 身   上    跨  去 

You want to step over me

zěn néng zài rěn ràng 

怎  能   再  忍  让   

How can I bear it any longer

wǒ xīn gǔn tàng   qǐ róng ěr děng zào jù 

我 心  滚  烫     岂 容   尔 等   造  句 

My heart is boiling with anger and so on

dā jiān zài xī yáng lǐ   mǎ tí shēng tà shuǐ yǐng 

搭 肩   在  夕 阳   里   马 蹄 声    踏 水   影   

Shoulder in the evening sun horse hoof sound foot water shadow

zhuàng shì suí jūn bù wéi wǎ quán cóng wèi xiǎng guò yǒu guī qī 

壮     士  随  军  不 为  瓦 全   从   未  想    过  有  归  期 

Strong men with the army not for the whole tile never thought to have a return period

zhàn huǒ dāng zhōng xí lǐ   jié rán yì shēn de yǒng qì 

战   火  当   中    洗 礼   孑  然  一 身   的 勇   气 

Wash in fire: clean spirit

yǎn kàn kū yè jié shuāng 

眼  看  枯 叶 结  霜     

The eye sees the frost on the dead leaves

máng máng huāng yuán yě zhǒng zhèng biàn dì 

茫   茫   荒    原   野 冢    正    遍   地 

Vast wastelands and mounds were spreading over the land

zhàn zhēng hào jiǎo yǐ chuī xiǎng 

战   争    号  角   已 吹   响    

The battle horn has sounded

sī niàn xiāo yān zhōng fēi yáng 

思 念   硝   烟  中    飞  扬   

In the smoke of thought and thought

jǐn shèng láo lèi de bì bǎng 

仅  剩    劳  累  的 臂 膀   

Only his tired arms were left

dǐ zhù zuì hòu de chéng qiáng 

抵 住  最  后  的 城    墙    

Hold against the back wall

xiàng cāng tiān sǎ xià zuì hòu de liè jiǔ 

向    苍   天   洒 下  最  后  的 烈  酒

 Throw down the last of the fiery wine on heaven

yáo wàng cán bài de dù kǒu 

遥  望   残  败  的 渡 口  

Look away at the ruined crossing

bǎo jiā wèi guó jué bù fǔ shǒu 

保  家  卫  国  绝  不 俯 首   

The protection of the country must not bow

dìng dāng yǒng chuí bù xiǔ 

定   当   永   垂   不 朽  

Must never perish

huí xiǎng qī chǐ fēng xuě zhōng guī qù 

回  想    七 尺  风   雪  中    归  去 

Think back to seven feet of wind and snow

yáo yáo shù yuè sì wú qī 

遥  遥  数  月  似 无 期 

Months seem to stretch out like water

xuè rǎn yīng huā yān yún lǐ 

血  染  樱   花  烟  云  里 

Blood in the clouds of primrose smoke

qià sì wú shēng de fú bǐ 

恰  似 无 声    的 伏 笔 

Like a silent pen

wàn zhòng yì xīn fēng yān qǐ 

万  众    一 心  烽   烟  起 

Many a heart feng smoke

ruò zú hún yào guī gù lǐ 

若  卒 魂  要  归  故 里 

If the spirit of the dead return to the past

sī niàn míng yuè luò shuǐ dǐ 

思 念   明   月  落  水   底 

Think of the bottom of the water next month

yīng xióng ér nǚ wéi zhī jǐ 

英   雄    儿 女 为  知  己 

Every male knows his own daughter

shāng kǒu yǐ zhuì rù dào hóu tóu 

伤    口  已 坠   入 到  喉  头  

The wound had sunk to the throat

bù róng wǒ piàn kè de chóu chú 

不 容   我 片   刻 的 踌   躇  

No time for me to linger

hái xū bō kāi duō shǎo mí wù 

还  需 拨 开  多  少   迷 雾 

Still need to dispel more or less fog

shèng xià le duō shǎo de jǐ zhù 

剩    下  了 多  少   的 脊 柱  

How much of the ridge column is left

yuè shì wū yún mì bù   wú bèi yuè dān dāo zhí rù 

越  是  乌 云  密 布   吾 辈  越  单  刀  直  入 

The more it is wuyun Mibu my generation more single knife straight into

gōng míng lì lù   wú xū zài hu 

功   名   利 禄   无 需 在  乎 

Fame and wealth depend on nothing

wù wàng guó nán hòu rén jì zhù 

勿 忘   国  难  后  人  记 住  

Don't forget a country's troubles

tóng zé yǐ gù nì xíng chù 

同   泽 已 故 逆 行   处  

With ze dead retrograde place

nán zhǎn què xīn tóu hèn wú zhù 

难  斩   却  心  头  恨  无 助  

Hard to cut but heart head hate without help

hū fēng yǐn lù jié nán dù 

呼 风   饮  露 劫  难  度 

The difficulty of exhaling wind and drinking dew

gún gǔn cháng jiāng tà wàn lǐ lù 

滚  滚  长    江    踏 万  里 路 

The Yangtze river rolls on for ten thousand li

róng mǎ yì shēng   bǎo jiā wèi guó 

戎   马 一 生      保  家  卫  国  

Rongma life to protect the country

qiān qiū wàn dài   měi gè jīng zhé 

千   秋  万  代    每  个 惊   蛰  

Thousands and thousands of generations of each jingzhe

héng dāo lì mǎ   chí chěng jiāng chǎng 

横   刀  立 马   驰  骋    疆    场    

The horizontal sword stands on a horse and gallops across the field

wàng xiǎng chù pèng shān hé 

妄   想    触  碰   山   河 

I want to touch the mountains and rivers

shàng mǎ lóng   xià mǎ hu   pī jīng yòu zhǎn jí 

上    马 龙     下  马 虎   披 荆   又  斩   棘 

On the horse dragon under the horse tiger peijing and cut thorns

tóu dǐng tiān   cǎi huáng tǔ   huī dòng wǒ dà qí 

头  顶   天     踩  黄    土   挥  动   我 大 旗 

The top of the sky on the yellow soil waved my flag

huí xiǎng qī chǐ fēng xuě zhōng guī qù 

回  想    七 尺  风   雪  中    归  去 

Think back to seven feet of wind and snow

yáo yáo shù yuè sì wú qī 

遥  遥  数  月  似 无 期 

Months seem to stretch out like water

xuè rǎn yīng huā yān yún lǐ 

血  染  樱   花  烟  云  里 

Blood in the clouds of primrose smoke

qià sì wú shēng de fú bǐ 

恰  似 无 声    的 伏 笔 

Like a silent pen

wàn zhòng yì xīn fēng yān qǐ 

万  众    一 心  烽   烟  起 

Many a heart feng smoke

ruò zú hún yào guī gù lǐ 

若  卒 魂  要  归  故 里 

If the spirit of the dead return to the past

sī niàn míng yuè luò shuǐ dǐ 

思 念   明   月  落  水   底 

Think of the bottom of the water next month

yīng xióng ér nǚ wéi zhī jǐ 

英   雄    儿 女 为  知  己 

Every male knows his own daughter

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