Can anyone help me make sure this paragraph is grammatically correct?

[Mariam Ashraf]

真正的成功是看着镜子，知道你比昨天更好。真正的成功是继续，即使觉得你会再次失败。真正的成功是在你的旅程，不只你的目的。

[889]

"真正的成功是在你的旅程，不只你的目的."

 

I'm not clear what you're trying to say here.

 

(Myself, I tend to avoid abstractions in Chinese because Chinese tend to take them literally. “What trip? Where are you going?")

 

EDIT: Maybe something like: "True achievement lies in undertaking your journey, not merely reaching your destination"?

[Experinker]

I prefer to say in this way

“真正的成功是看着镜子，知道自己比昨天更好。真正的成功是，即使觉得会再次失败，仍继续前进。真正的成功是享受旅途本身，而非渴望最后的终点。”