rezaf Posted October 20, 2007 at 09:25 PM Report Share Posted October 20, 2007 at 09:25 PM 我有很长的时间没有努力学习。下个月我要考hsk考试，所以学习很忙。前天我决定还是要努力学习。除了上课以外我要每天自己学习五六个小时，周末9个小时。我觉得在家里学习没有成效， 因为我一个小时学习就厌烦了， 要上网。今天上午十一点我就去图书馆学汉语了。我们大学的图书馆不仅很大，而且很现代。这是第一次我去这个图书馆， 以前一次也没去过。图书馆非常安静， 很多学生在那儿学习，学得很认真。看了他们，我就感到非常鼓舞。我听着音乐到晚上10：30一直学习汉语了。10：30 图书馆的一位工作人员来到我那儿，说“快要关门。”听了她的话我就出发回宿舍来了。今天我一共学完了三课，记住了课文，复习了语法和练习。我非常满意， 希望每天都可以这样学习。 朋友们,你们welcome to改正我写的文章。 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rootfool Posted October 21, 2007 at 02:43 AM Report Share Posted October 21, 2007 at 02:43 AM 我有很长的时间没有努力学习了 而下个月我要参加hsk考试（the "而" is used for connect the former sentence.） 所以学习很忙。(I don't know what you exact means,sometimes we say 所以学习很紧张,but this sentence contains the meaning: "we study harder because of the hsk is coming.But you said "前天我决定还是要努力学习" in the later,so Ithink it's not fit in here.) 我计划(connection,the same with the former "而")除了上课以外每天再自己学习五六个小时() 因为我学一个小时就厌烦了，就想上网。 今天上午十一点我就去图书馆学汉语了，这是第一次我去这个图书馆。（the 以前一次也没去过 is a duplication.）我们大学的图书馆不仅很大，而且很现代。图书馆非常安静， 我听着音乐学习汉语一直到晚上10：30. 说“快要关门了。” 听了她的话我就回宿舍了。(In my opinion,"出发" is used for 'abnormal' action.Just like if you go to work, you can say “我8点就去上班” instead of "我8点就出发去上班". In here after your outgoing,coming home is normal.So you don't need to use "出发" ) 背诵了课文 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
studentyoung Posted October 22, 2007 at 06:07 AM Report Share Posted October 22, 2007 at 06:07 AM 朋友们,你们welcome to改正我写的文章。 朋友们，欢迎你们来修改我的文章。 谢！ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rezaf Posted October 22, 2007 at 02:05 PM Author Report Share Posted October 22, 2007 at 02:05 PM 谢谢你们！ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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