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Translating a passage in a poem that refers to a women:

"hard on the outside, soft in the middle"

"Your soft brown eyes reveal your true nature, and the beauty within"

ANY help at all is greatly appreciated.

Thanks!

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wai gang nei rou
= 外剛內柔

some peopel also use 外堅 instead of 外剛.

"Your soft brown eyes reveal your true nature, and the beauty within"

i think an exact word-by-word translation to chinese won't work as well in conveying the "romantic" nature of the original sentence. maybe i'd use something like 靈 魂 之 窗 (= windows of soul) to represent eyes. as for the other words, try searching for them in zhongwen.com.

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Your soft brown eyes reveal your true nature, and the beauty within

你温柔的黑眼睛透出你如水的性灵,而美蕴含其中。

或者“你浅棕色的眼睛”?

:mrgreen::tong

BTW, what do you think about chinese people's eyes? do you think they are black or dark brown? a friend of mine(american) insists it should be dark brown, not black. what's your opinion?

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a friend of mine(american) insists it should be dark brown, not black. what's your opinion?

They should be brown. Look at them closely and you'll see that they're brown. In fact, I don't think black is a valid choice for many forms where you have to fill out your eye color.

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the translation provided for "hard on the outside, soft in the middle" comes back as" outside is supple" am i missing something?

BTW - her eyes are a light brown, although her family has very dark to black eyes...

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