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An old poem, how nice! (And how difficult!)

Well, poetry is hard to understand, let alone translate with precision, but I really like it :D, so here's my version of

春云吹散湘帘雨,絮黏蝴蝶飞还住。人在玉楼中,楼高四面风。

柳烟丝一把,暝色笼鸳瓦。休近小阑干,夕阳无限山

"clouds of spring shower rainy curtains over the river xiang

like a fluttering butterfly flying with heavy wings to and fro

in the lofty jade palace, surrounded by strong winds, pipe in hand

like a love bird caged in darkness

I am pacing across the balustrade, in the endless, towering evening glow"

i.e.>> explanation in Chinese says he (the author) is spellbound, restless, he feels there's nothing to hold on to, no place he can go to, to put away this feeling of love which he finds so hard to resist.

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Thanks, Hofmann. Here's a question about the meaning of 柳烟丝:

I think 烟丝 = minced tobacco. But 柳 = willow. Does that mean this kind of tobacco made of minced willow branch? If so, that's weird! Does 柳烟丝 has another meaning? Or, could it be that 柳烟丝一把 = A smoking pipe made of willow wood? I'd appreciate a lot if someone can help clarify this.:help

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