Chinese imagination in children's poems

[Wippen (inactive) 94]

Have these poems already been discussed on the forums. if so, just ignore this post.

 

I came across these poems written by children of varying ages. They show a lot of imagination on part of the children and also you can detect what words are frequently used by children when left to their own imagination.

 

I like all of the poem, for their rhyming and content but if I was to pick one it would be the following which describes the importance of the individual in China and in Chinese society  summed up in a few lines (see below). Which poem do you like and why?

我

 

我们班上的学生数

要加上我

才是26个

 

我们国家的总人口

我也

占了一个名额

 

计算地球重量时

我的体重应该也包含在内吧

 

在这浩瀚的

宇宙中

我占的空间

会有多大呢

 

妈妈说

没有我

整个家都好像空了

more poems on this link

https://baijiahao.baidu.com/s?id=1585952184191743211&wfr=spider&for=pc

[EnergyReaper 7]

I really like this one though it's a little sentimental. I can't believe it was wrote by a 5-year-old when I saw it. you can even see the sensitive soul under this poem.

《回到地面》

朵朵｜五岁

要是笑过了头

你就会飞到天上去

要想回到地面

你就必须做一件伤心事