Feedback on my pronunciation please!! (Singing Tong Hua!!)

[Sertr]

Hi! I tried singing and would like feedback on my pronunciation please!

 

Be as critical as you need to!

 

My singing is horrible and so out of tune please don't focus on that ahahah!

 

Thanks!

[Lu]

It seems you forgot to attach a recording or include a link to your singing.

[歐博思]

On 5/26/2019 at 6:45 PM, Sertr said:

My singing is horrible and so out of tune please don't focus on that ahahah!

Lots of tones, a huge component of pronunciation as important as vowels in English, get artistically embellished or removed in songs, so songs may not be a good measuring stick for pronunciation.

 

Or it could be, but we don't know without your recording ;)