can someone check and correct my attempt at chinese?

[Strawberries513]

大家好！我的名字叫Christina。我是美国人，我会说一点儿中文。我的男朋友叫周游是中国人。他说中文说得很好。

um.. is all of that right? lol thanks for any corrections. and be brutal.

谢谢你！

[winnipegli]

no big mistakes...........

[Ferno]

I thought all grammar particles "de" are the same: 的, I didn't know it was "得" when you say "shuo1 de" :o

[Desmond]

there is "的", "地", and "得", although I've heard you can just use "的" for them all, it's still not proper.

大家好！我的名字叫Christina。我是美国人，我会说一点儿中文。我的男朋友叫周游是中国人。他说中文说得很好。

I think it may be better to separate of of your sentence like so: "我的男朋友叫周游，他是中国人"

[xiaocai]

I think the "得" is OK here.

And as Desmond said, it's more natural to separate the sentence into two parts.

加油！

[HashiriKata]

The following are suggested only so that you'll see more alternatives:

"我的男朋友叫周游,他是中国人"

You can also say "我的男朋友叫周游，是中国人" (= need to add the comma to your original)

"他说中文说得很好。"

You can also say "他中文说得很好。"

(If he's Chinese, he should naturally speak Chinese well. Is he an overseas Chinese?)

[adrianlondon]

Is 我的名字叫correct?

Shouldn't it be just 我叫 ?

[HashiriKata]

Is 我的名字叫correct?

It's a bit redundent but it's, too, correct.

[kudra]

see

Grammar #3 的得地

http://www.chinese-forums.com/index.php?/topic/3034-all-simple-yet-confusing-grammar-rules

[dwood92688]

大家好！我的名字叫Christina。我是美国人，我会说一点儿中文。我的男朋友叫周游是中国人。他说中文说得很好。

um.. is all of that right? lol thanks for any corrections. and be brutal.

谢谢你！

1. 大家好！=> Great Start!

2. 我的名字叫Christina。Perfect. The short form is：我叫Christina。

3。 我是美国人，我会说一点儿中文。 Repeated subject 我 should be dropped. Thus: 我是美国人，会说一点儿中文。

Alternately: 我的名字叫Christina, 是美国人。我会说一点儿中文。

4. 我的男朋友叫周游是中国人。=> 我的男朋友叫周游，是个中国人。 Alternately, 我的男朋友周游是中国人。

5. 他说中文说得很好。=> 他的中文说得很好。

6. 谢谢你！Since you are addressing to potentially more than one person, but may not get response from more than one person, using singular 你 is not quite right. 谢谢！ would cover you perfectly.

[Vphoenix]

"得"is right。

我的男朋友叫周游，是中国人。

You'd better add a comma here。

[Strawberries513]

thanks for all your help guys